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Sunday, August 22, 2010

mizo gothic story- 6th chapter

(Note: The story is purely fiction and does not, in any way, relate to the life of anyone. He thawnthu hi ka phuah liau liau ani a, mahse thawnthu dang in lo chhiar tawh nen inanna alo awm anih chuan min notify hram turin ka ngen che u. I hate plagiarism just as much as I don't want to be part of it)

                                Chutia min rawn pan chu nikhaw hre lovin ka lo awm ani chek ang chu, ka han harh chuan chhuatah ka lo mu reng mai a. Ka tihngaihna hre lo chuan pawnah ka tlan chhuak tawp a. Engmah phei chu a thleng zui ta lem lo a, pawnah chuan ni chhuak ka nghak thleng rak mai. A tlangvala pumpa chutia han awm chu ka zak hnuhnawh viau na a, mak chu ka ti lo thei lo. Ka thianpa chu ka han hrilh a, ani pawh chuan ka thusawi chu a awih ve ta deuh aniang rawn riah chu a tum ta a. Chumi chawlhkar tawp ah chuan ka han inthiar kha, chhuatah (tile ang chi kha ania) hmel hi a lo lang a. In hriatthiam dan tur chuan he ka toilet hi European type ani a, hma lam bih thlak chiah ang vel ani a hlat zawng chu. Ka inthiar pawh chhunzawm ta lo chuan ka tho sawk sawk a (ka la inthiar hman lo) ka thianpa chu ka han ko ta a.Kan let leh chuan a hma ai khan alo dang lam tawh nasa khawp mai. A rapthlak duh kher asin. 

                                   Chu hmel awm dan chu ka la mitthla thei tun thleng hian. Ka hmuh tirh kha chuan hmel ani tih a hria theih kha ani a, kan va let leh chuan hmel chu a lang chiang kher mai (a lan dan ber ni a ka hriat chu _ hmeichhia thi tawh, a hmel pawh tawih chhe tan tawh a ang deuh ber). Ka thianpa chuan tihfai a han tum a, a nawh nasat poh leh a lang fiah tulh tulh mai lehnghal a, a rap awm zia kha. Chutah kan thin ti thawng em em tu a thleng ta- chu hmel chuan a mit tihbaiawm deuh chu a rawn khap vel. Kan te chhuak lo chauh hi ani ringawt, mahse chhuat a hmel lang vanga patling pahnih han tlanchhiat em kha chu kan tlawmngai deuh chuan ka hria. A reh mai loh avang chuan hmun hranah (inthiarna hi pathum a awm ka inluah ah hian) kan inthiar mai a, a chhan pawh hmel bula inthiar chu nuam a nuam lem lo. Pahnih kan nih vang chuan hlauh dan a nep lo kher mai. A tuk ah chuan kan han en leh a, a lo lang ta reng2 lo mai a, a mak duh kher mai. Zanriah kan ei kham, ka thianpa guest room lama a inthiar chu a rawn te chhuak vak mai a. Ka va thlen phei chuan ka thianpa chuan inthiarna chhuat chu a lo kawk ringawt a. Ka han en nak chuan hmel bawk a lo ni leh a, a hma ai chuan a fiah in a mitkhap pawh chu a rang zawk a. Ka hlau lutuk chu ka mittui hi a tla zung zung tawh mai a. Kan che vel chu min melh anih chu, a rapthlak zia kha aw. 

                                A mit khan min melh kual rek rek a, kan mitah kher min melh kha chu ka zam ngang mai. Tichuan, ka thianpa chuan Esther leh Mary te chu ava phone nghal a, anni chu zan rei tawh mah nise an rawn thleng phei ta thuai a (Mary te hian car an nei). Esther chuan a hmuh rualin, "Hman ami phei kha chu lei te min chhuah khum thin, amahin a reh leh mai zel" atia. Kan han ti ti zel hnu chuan kha hmel kha hmeichhe hmel nge niin kan hria a, tunge anih chu zawn chhuah kan rilruk ta a.

12 comments:

  1. Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak! Rapthlak!
    -ninja

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  2. Ziak kal tluang tha sawt khawp mai, keep it up.

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  3. ehee!! zawnchuah hun chuan lei chiah khum ve don mi?? lolzzz

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  4. 'Eeekhai a, nizana ka chhiar ngamlo chu ka ti fuh nih hi, den riau mai :D.. Inthiar hun chu ka maimitchhing tlat ang :D
    -lalmisualpa

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  5. E, ka tih tan tlat, den riau a nia. Kut dinglama Bible kengin ka chhiar ngam tawk a ni.
    Ti zel rawh, a tawp thut roh ange
    ...khrum

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  6. @ninja... lolzzzz @HV... ty ty.... @sandman... a plot hi ka phuahchawp tak meuh2 zel... har duh raz.. @Jewel hahaha a lo chhiatkhum hrep mai anga'h haha @lalmisualpa i dawihzep lutux @ khumchikthei khrum lolzzzzzzzzzzz

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  7. Ka chhiar chak sia, ka hlau bawk sia, hei ka ron bih leh duk duk tawh ania... tlanchhiat pah ka inring reng!
    -Maisek

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  8. Mitkhap thei leh lei chhuah khum khi ka nui nasa ltk a, chu thlahrang chu fiamthu a duh hmelzek mai :D hmundang zawng aiin mi bathroom awmlai te bihthla vel..

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  9. Dude^^^^ i understan if the virtual ghost on the tile Blinked^^ but think about it.... leichhuah leh xel chu... more like a "Child's Fantasy".... its funny^^^^ a gothic na a bo....

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  10. A ngaihnawm bok si,ka mur sung2 mai....chhiar zomzel chakom boksi...
    -joboty

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