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Thursday, August 26, 2010

mizo gothic story - the 10th chapter

(Note: The story is purely fiction and does not, in any way, relate to the life of anyone. He thawnthu hi ka phuah liau liau ani a, mahse thawnthu dang in lo chhiar tawh nen inanna alo awm anih chuan min notify hram turin ka ngen che u. I hate plagiarism just as much as I don't want to be part of it)

                    Kan han rel khawm nak nak a, Mary chanchin hre turin Mizoram lam pan kan rilruk ta a. A nu kan han biak pawp leh chuan an address te kan han dil a, chawlh la in kar khat cham tum kan ni. Khua a that vak loh avangin kan flight pawh chu an delay nasa ngiang mai. Tluang takin Lengpui kan thleng a, chhungte pawh hrilh lawk lem lo kan nih avangin, taxi kan la chho ta kha ania. Sawi chipchiar lo mai ila, kan thlen tuk chuan kan han inhmukhawm a, Mary te in lam chu kan pan ta a. Mary (a hming hi ka lam rik deuh sek a ngai dawn a, min lo hrethiam mai aniang chu) nu hi kan hrilhlawk chu an mai a, kan va thlen chuan a lo fel hle mai, thingpuite min lo lum sak nghal a. Thil thleng te kan han hrilh chuan mak ati hle mai a.

                    A fanu (Mary hian a pa hi a naupan tet laia chan ani) chutianga phaia hnathawk a awm, a inluahpuinu ngei mai leh, a thiante a hmu hnunung ber tu te meuhvin Mizoram lam pan a kan han hmu chu mak a ti hle mai a. Dik tak chuan kum tam fe a liam tawh a Mary boral hnu hian, mahse a nu kan han hmu ngawt mai pawh a. Kan hlawhchham lem love, Mary thih dan khan han zawh chuan heti hian min chhang a, "Mary kha rilru buaina a neih ka hre ngai lova, amaherawhchu 'Khawvel hran inhriatthiam loh tur si ami ka nih hi" a ti thin a. Eng teh ualah ka ngaihsak ngai lova, a sawi zin tak viau hnu chuan rilru lam doctor ka panpui ta a. Doctor lah chuan engkim a tha vek e a ti si a, keini ang nu mawl tan chuan a hre zawk thu chu a lo pawm loh theih lohva.

                    "Mary kha ka zawt fova, eng khawvel nge tih. A ni chuan, 'He khawvel ang tho hi ani e, a danglam na chu ka duh duh ka ti thei. Tunah pawh hian in khawvelah hian ka awm lo', a tia ka nuih a zat rualin mak chu ka ti viau thin. A boral ni kha han sawi ta ila- TV a en a, kei chokaah ka awm a, a eih vak vak a. Kei lah chuan, 'Tunge ko che, hei ka awm ve reng a, an koh che ka hre lo, i bengchhe ri anih kha", ka tih sak mai a. Mary chuan, 'May in min ko alawm. Ani chu thlarau khawvel ami ania, ka awmna nen chuan a dang. Min lo ko chiang lutuk', a tia. Chhan vak ngaihna ka hre lo ani ber, ka awih loh chu thuhran ni se (note to readers: hetia May hming a sawi hian ka phu chiang kher mai, mak ka tih bakah, ka thiante pawh chuan min lo melh hrek hrek a).

                    "Tichuan inchungah a tlan chhova, ka en zui lem hlei lo, kha kha ka thiltihsual ber chu ani ta ani (a hnuk a ulh hle a sawi lai hian). Ka hriat leh chu kawng thlang lama te thawm ani a, ka han dak thla chu ka fanu ruang thisen nen a lo inchiahpiah chu ka hmu ta. Min thawng kher mai". A bak hi chu in hrethiam ang a, ruang an sawngbawl a, an vui a kan hretlang vek ang chu min lo hrethiam ula. A tukah chuan kan han inhmukhawm leh a, May te ina kal chu kan rawt ta a (kei phei chuan ka hreh hle mai). Kan han sawi khawm nak nak chuan eng khawvel nge Mary khan a sawi ang aw? tih hi zawhna lian ber chu ani ta. Ka thianpa chu a ngawi vung vung a, "Mipakhat hriat ka nei a, hetiang lam hria hi ania, iva pan hmasa teh ang u May te in kan kal hmain", a rawn ti deuh phawng mai a.

9 comments:

  1. A nilo zawkah ka comment lehnghal! Copy - paste pawp ang...akeke.

    Ka bo ka ti ka tia hemi hma chiah ami hi ka lo la chhiar lo pek a!

    Hmmm...a hmalam ami ho a that viau vei nen...hei chu ka sawisel dawn. Thianpa, tlemin uluk deuh tehhh...i ziak ning lek lek ta a va ang tan ve! A thu inlaklawn chhoh danah hian a hma lam a tluklo tlat. Punctuation leh word thenkhat tlem siamthat ngai ka hmu ve teh mial. But, keep it up...don't worry, be sexy...akeke.

    - EL TEE

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  2. Zanin chu kan vengah thli a thu vuk vuk mai a, khua a dur khup mai bawk si, ruahhmi a rawn tla sep sep a, veng lehlam ui bauh ri chu a tial ruan mai a, GOTHICA thlahrang kha a rawn hran mai hi kan hlau khawp a, ka khur lo chauh a ni...
    Ziak zel rawh!

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  3. A va mak ve le! 10th ngeiah hian ka comment in ka hre si a, 9th lamah a lut daih. A va hrang veee...ka duh miahlo nia...tih tak emah chuan thih hi ka thlahlel reng reng hleinem...lolzzz

    - EL TEE

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  4. I like the 10th chapter.... its different, more mature and i lov the suspense... the mystery... the link.... the clue... etc... gud job :)

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  5. Commentna pawh hi a hrang tan chu anih ber tawh hi mawle! Comment te poh hi ka hlau deuh roh tawh ania! Gothic, commentna em em hi chu ti hrang lo la! pliz!

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  6. Ngaihnawm sawt ve. A tihtawp danah i buai ange aw!! :D
    -lalmi5ualpa

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  7. Zanan pawn kan mu meng sek tawh mai..Photo frame kan melh sek bawk a...lolz

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  8. Gythlaknom lutuk tlat

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